பால்யத்தின் இனிமைகள்....



வைகரை பொழுதுகளில்
ஆத்துச்சாலையில் கரம் கோர்த்தபடி நீயும் நானும்
தூரத்தில் ரயில் வண்டியின் சத்தம்
காதருகில் தாமிரபரணியின் சலசலப்பு
கவிதைகளும் கம்யூனிஸமும் பேசிக்கொண்டதால்
நட்பானோமாஅல்லது நட்பை வளர்க்க
அவைகளை பேசிகொண்டோமா
மழையை நேசிக்கும்் தோழியே
இப்பொழுதெல்லாம் என்றாவது
உன் மின்தொடரும் என் மின்தொடரும்
தாமதமானால் சந்தித்து கொள்கிறோம்
நம் நட்பை தாமிரபரணியின்
கரையோர நாணல்கள் பேசிகொள்கின்றன காற்றோடு....

19 comments:

Anitha said...

Dear Iniyal,

It is nice..when i read this poem..i can visualize your young age with your friend and its importance..Keep on posting like this..

With Luv,
Anitha

Anonymous said...

Dear Iniyal,

Nice poem..When i read this i can able to visualize your young age with your friend and it's importance..Keep on posting..

With Luv,
Anitha

Vijay.V.E said...

Dear Indhu,

Its very nice da....simply Super da.....

by
Vijay.V.E

SHEELA said...

Nice indu, super for kavidhai as well as correcta indha varamum update pannitiye!!

Iniyal said...

\\ can visualize your young age with your friend\\

Thanks ani, that real feel i want to produce in my lines. Ur comments make me still more enthusiastic and i will keep on posting.

Iniyal

Iniyal said...

Thanks vijay.
Keep on visiting, ur comments make me enthusiastic.

Iniyal said...

\\indha varamum update pannitiye!!
\\

Ithukku neenga thaan help panni irukkeenga. Neengalam thaan en padaipugalukku nalla vimarsagargal.
Ini varum vaarangalil ellam update panren.

kandhavelan said...

indhu...

indha kavidhaila unga balya snegidhathai azhaga solli irukeenga..neega vetty pechu pesa matteenga nu soosagama solliirukeenga..kavidhaya padikkum bodhae Thamirabarani aathoram naanalagalayum rayilosayayum aatrin osayayum unara mudigiradhu..

ungal mana pudhayalil irundhu innum pala kavi pokkizhangalai veliyida yen manamarndha vaazthukkal...

Iniyal said...

\\kavidhaya padikkum bodhae Thamirabarani aathoram naanalagalayum rayilosayayum aatrin osayayum unara mudigiradhu..
\\

Romba nandri kandavelan.

\\ungal mana pudhayalil irundhu innum pala kavi pokkizhangalai veliyida yen manamarndha vaazthukkal...
\\

Ennoda padapugazhai perumai paduthiyatharku meendum nandri, aana antha azhavu pugalchiku uriyavaigala intha kavithaigal nu therila. Kandippa ezhuthuven ennoda anubavangala.

Endrendrum natpirku iniyal.

Jaggu said...

Yoi Indhu ma!!,
That poem is really touching. That is wonderful gift for gundus. Accept my special gift for this poem... ready .. 1, 2, 3.. Ummmmmma... Long live your friendship!!

With smile,
Jagguuuu.

Iniyal said...

Thanks jaggu...
haiyo enna kaapatha aale illaiya...
intha ponnu umma lam tharuthu....
keep reading.

endrum natpirku iniyal.

Anonymous said...

A friend is someone who understands and
someone you can trust.

They will listen to you both night and day without ever making a fuss.
A friend will stand by your side when you are right and sometimes when you are wrong.

They will hold you up when you are weak and provide support to make you strong.
A friend's love is unconditional and unique in every way.

And when you have problems a true friend will kneel with you and pray.
A friend will stand by your side through thick and thin.

And whenever everyone have deserted you they still will be your friend.
A friend once said to me that a friend is sent from God above and I believe this to be true.

~Arun~

Raghavan alias Saravanan M said...

//நம் நட்பை தாமிரபரணியின்


கரையோர நாணல்கள் பேசிகொள்கின்றன காற்றோடு.... //

சும்மா நச்சுன்னு முடிச்சிருக்கீங்க :)

வாழ்த்துக்கள் தோழி!

Iniyal said...

Nandri raghav, unga comment ennaya urchaga paduthuthu.
Adikadi vaanga...

Raghavan alias Saravanan M said...

//Nandri raghav, unga comment ennaya urchaga paduthuthu.
Adikadi vaanga...//

My pleasure Indhu.

Keep going :)

Cheers,
Raghavan alias Saravanan M.

Anonymous said...

ninaivugalin kolangal innum thaan unnai vanna mayamakuhindrana.....

sariyahathaan aarambithu irukirai...
innum payanithu par... thendralodu thamirabaraniyin sangeethamum unnudan.....

Sheela Macthaline said...

fantastic piece of work...i just loved it sis ..

Iniyal said...

Nandri unga vimarsanathirku.

unga blog a paathen, neengalum nellai thaan pola.

Natpirku iniyal.

Sheela Macthaline said...

ya me from palayamkottai..